sabato 20 ottobre 2012

I Realized your Dream...The "WRITER"...!!!

FOR U...
This story is a friend who you can follow on 
twitter is called EMIEL HEPPE @EmielHeppe...
Hey guys, I've worked hard 
to make my first chapter of my story. of course 
there will be more but sadly takes that some
time... :(...
Anyway please review this chapter so i can 
make it an awesome story.
Ow yeah: i don't own Kickin' it and neither 
that weird ninja or whatever he is.

Jack POV
It was 2:00 AM when I wake up from a nice dream 
about the love of my life.
on a strange reason I sensed there was something 
in my room.
Slowly I'll moved out of my bed and walked through 
my room try to find the light switch.
Something's moving. I heard a click and something 
that sounds like a lock.
I'll finally found the switch and quickly I turned the 
lights on.
Nothing strange happened. "Hey,, that's strange… " 
I whispered in myself.
On my desk there was a little piece of paper with a 
few letters on it.
I walked to my desk and took the paper. It said:
Come tonight to your dojo at the mall.
And please, bring your friend Kim as well,
The Black Warrior.
"Weird." I said. I watched the time again and saw it 
was just 2:30 AM.
"Well I'll better get some more sleep then."
The next morning I woke up, the first thing I was 
thinking of, was Kim.
From the last year I developed a huge crush on her. 
But I think I am afraid to tell her.
Maybe because I don't know what she thinks about 
me, and maybe another reason.
So I took my phone and called Kim about the strange 
note I found at night.
"Hmm strange indeed." She said. "Well all we could do
 is follow the directions of the note you have."
"You sure about this?" I asked her. "Hah didn't you 
know I could take care of myself!"

Kim POV
Even when that came out really fierce, I am actually 
was happy he cared so much about me!
What means he may love me back… the butterfly's 
flew through my stomach again by the thought he 
loves me back.
But no way! I mean he's Jack all right! The doorbell 
ring and I looked out of my window to see who it was.

Half on half I'll expected to see Kelsey. who was 
Jerry's girlfriend for almost two years by now. Or 
maybe Grace.
But the one at the door was Jack! My heart was 
pounding like crazy when I saw him stay at the
 doorway.
i guess he feels I've been looking him because he 
looked up right into my eyes. "Hey Kim, ready for 
school?"
I answered. "Jack! I wasn't expecting you, yeah I'll 
be right with ya, do you have a moment?"
Jack laughed. "Haha yeah I'll just wait for you." I can 
see there are 2 little blushes on his cheeks. Or did I 
just imagined that?
"Hey ready for school?" He yelled to me. "Yeah, just a 
second." I answered.
Quick I'll grabbed all school books and my lunch and
 rushed to the door. I'll tried to remain my calmness 
again and opened the door.
At school Grace caught up with me almost right away.
"So did he asked you already?" She asked me.
"What should he ask me?" I asked back, but I am 
already know what she was going to say.
"DUHH Did Jack already asked you on a date of 
course! Come one Kim, you told me you love him so 
why are you Hesitates?"
"Because." I answer. "He don't love me back. And I 
don't want to break the bond we have now. As a

 strong friendship!"
Grace looked at me if she heard it rain in the
 Netherlands. (That actually make sense you know,
 I came from there as well)
"Sure Kim, keep believing that. But don't cry by me 
anymore then." I hesitates for a moment and then..
"Should I ask him if he wants to go out with me?"
 I spilled it out before I knew it.
Grace turned around with a big smile on her face. 
"Yes maybe you do, although officially he has to ask 
you! And we'll made him ask you!"
I looked at her and i can see she has a plan.
jack POV
after school me and the guys went to the dojo. 
The whole day was i've been thinking about that little
 note.
why just me and kim? was this some sort of trick?
 rudy came to me and apparently saw something was
 bothering me.
he asked me if there's something wrong. at the 
moment he did i looked at Kim. She nodded. it's okay
 to tell the others.
"okay you guys, last night i have found a little note, 
with some letters on it... i've got to..."
Eddie was the one that interrupted me by saying that
 is was probably an important police investigation.
Milton and Jerry both shussshhd him. they wanna 
know what i was about to say. So i told the guys 
what happened.
after i told the guys the whole story, they where all 
shouting om the loudest about what happend.
"why did they pick you?" Jerry asked me, (way to
 loud by the way)
"i am the pretty one here! hello!" he was clearly 
upset.
then Milton. "Jack, Kim why didn't you guys tell us 
before, i mean this is the kind of danger my father 
don't want me to get in."
unlike the others, Eddie was only excitement!
"wow you're guys are classified to compeed in the 
Japanese black warrior competition? that's so cool. 
man i wish i could get in..."
that last sentence came out very disappointing. 
"wowowow Eddie? you knew about them?" that was 
rudy. "how come?"
so Eddie began his story. i noticed that Kim was 
sitting really close to me. but i don't mind at all.
eddie's storylong time ago, there where three legendary black 
warriors in Japan.
they trained together and became the best of the 
best. But like every story beginds, they split all up 
and started their own dojo.
non the less they stay in contact and one day, the 
warriors decide their students to compeed against 
each other.
this is how the black warrior tournament was born.
Kim's POVJack and i where waiting in the dojo for the
mysterious ninja to come.
for some strange reason we had turned off the lights.
 i was feeling happy noticing Jack so close nearby.
and for a strange reason i felt that he thought this as
 well.
"i wonder when that person is gonna show himself." 
i said to him.
he looked at me. when i noticed that, i blushed.
for a strange reason, i was not the only one. i saw 
two big blushes on Jack's cheecks as well.
maybe i don't need Grace for Jack to love me.. love 
me? no way...? no i love him, i realised.
i crawled into his arm's and he pulled me close. and
 hold me tight.
"Kim... gee ehh.. i wanna ask you something..."
he had an hard time telling me so i decided to help 
him a bit by holding hands.
I looked into his eyes and he finally find the courag
to tell me.
"Kim i like you a lot since the moment we met,,, and
 i know this may be as a shock to you but..."
on that moment i pulled over to him. i could not fight 
the feeling i've got when he said those words.
at that time we melted into each other and kissed for 
Several minutes.
until we heard a voice. the mysterious person is 
arrived.
so this was the fist chapter. sadly i've got the 
title wrong, but who cares... (i do)
well please review you guys and i will soon put 
the second chapter online..

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